September 7th, 2012, 3:12 pm

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peteranckorn September 13th, 2012, 11:59 am

Cool-pretty good so far. Some very original ideas. Dialogue's a bit patchy in places, but I'm guessing that's not your fault. My main advise would be to find someone reliable that likes your work and can help you out with the English translation. Otherwise the dialogue may put off a lot of potential fans (which would be a pity , as this is a lively , fun comic).

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inversia September 13th, 2012, 2:01 pm

Well, of course is my fault, but as long as I have some comments I can figure out what I'm doing wrong, thanks so far for the good critisism I'll post double page next time, I try to do it weekly in the blogs(one for Spanish and the other one for English),and here in smackjeeves. I think it's going to take me sometime to read all your comic at the current page, but I think can give me some ideas also(not copying yours of course) to check dialogs grammar and stuff.

I suggest to interchange to be your Fan and you can be mine(Fan), if you want to recomend my comic, I will aprecciate it, I can also do the same, Anyway, thanks for visit this little space of my on internet